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Class poem Topic: Rain

Rain

The rain, million of heavenly tears.

It comes from a God's eyes,

When he is observing our sins.

And when it becomes dry,

We know that he has forgiven everything.

Class

My 2nd Haiku

Topic: Death
I have changed it below


Loud scream makes no sound
No revive from this big wound
Life on the death's list

My Haiku

Topic: Love Kills
Character: Sid Vicious (Simon John Ritchie) (1957 - 1979)

Sid Vicious was a bass player in the influential band named Sex Pistols. He could have a good career because audience really liked that band and he was a symbol and an ace to make a n unforgettable performance. Soon after he joined the band he met an Americannarcomaniac girl named Nancy Spungen ,they have developed very close relationships between each other and she became even more important for him than his band. Over time she made a gap between him and Sex Pistols bigger and bigger,she didn't let him go to concert tours and practice events. NancySpungen made him a heroin(cocaine,cannabis) -addicted person,and made him to focus only on herself.One night they had a conflict and Sid has jabbed her with a knife by an accident(under the influence of heroin). NancySpungen has died during that night because of a huge loss of blood. In the early morning Sid Vicious found the corpse of his girlfriend between the entrance to the toilet and the bedroom,he has called 911 by himself and was arrested for a murder case crime. Later, the Record Company has paid a pledge for his freedom and he went out of jail.On the evening of Febraury 1st 1979 Sid Vicious was released from jail and the same evening he went to party to celebrate his freedom, at that night he took heroin again and was found dead in his bed in the early morning. He had overdosed.... It was an evil love that he had with NancySpungen,and that love took everything from him,even his life,love kills...

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